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Si-yun,
I encourage you to continue writing. It helps you master your other English skills too. Write about anything:)
If teenagers have a cell phone, it could make some problems
> If teenagers have cellphones, it would cause some problems.
For example, teenagers might not concentrate on class, when they are sending sms to friends.
>:) Good sentence...
Similarly, teenagers are playing on cell phone ,when they are in class.
> Similarly, teenagers are playing on the cellphone, when they are in class.
Because now cell phone has many functions(ex-camera,mp3,game,internet) which is very interesting.
> Because now the cellphone has many functions (example: camera, mp3, internet) which is very interesting.
See you tomorrow.
Teacher NEa:) |
