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Hi Kevin^-^
Good to know about your wonderful vacation at Jeju Island^-^
>>>Here are some grammar corrections:
i went to jeju island.
=I went to Jeju Island.
the ocean, mountains and everything was really beautyful.and the every rock is whinstone.
=The ocean, mountains and everything was really beautiful and that every rock is whinstone.
beacuase the jeju island is volcano island.
=Because Jeju Island is a volcaninc island.
so when the volcano came out from the sea the lava gat halden. so every rock is whinstone. i saw black sand to.it was really cool. i want visit again.
=So when the volcano came out of the sea level and when it harden, every rock was whinstone.
I saw black sand to. I t was really cool. I want to visit that place again^-^.
Teacher Khristine |
