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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   hilica    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-01-28
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Hello Ms. Yeonji

 

I checked the cyworld part and I found this photo

 

 

I don't actually know how was I able to find it

because everythig was written in Korean...hehehehe

 

But if this is you then I would say that... ... ... ... Wow!!! Is this you? (hehe)

You look great!

 

 

>>>Here are some of the grammar corrections:

I haven't ever gone to other country.

=I haven't gone to other countries yet.


It would be my first time to be in other country.

=...in another country.


I'm looking forward to it.
When I am a young person, I'd like to as much as possible travel.

=Now that i'm still young, I'd like to travel as much as possible.


Khristine, do you have Cyworld ID ? (oh no I'm sorry I don't have)
Come to visit my cyworld homepage when you have any sparetime.
http://www.cyworld.com/artist-yjk
And my e-mail address; hilica@naver.com

 

Teacher Khristine

 

P.S. my e-mail add: kjjoa@yahoo.com

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