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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-06-24
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Finally, we went to on a trip to Jeju Island.
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We got on the plane to Jeju and rented a car.
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We first went to the beach near Jeju City.
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Then, we went to a big botanical garden and took a walk around there.
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*walked

I like walking in a forest or a botanical garden because it smells very good and air is also very fresh.
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We went to another beach and the color of the sea was emerald color.
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However, there were only a few people enjoying swimming because of the cloudy weather.
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We also visited a tea museum, a big park having waterfalls and a big pond.
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The next day, we went to a big cave occurred by volcanic activity occurred.
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The temperature in the cave was very low compared to outside.
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Lastly, we went to a big aquarium.
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We also tasted several local foods.
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Our trip was ended that way.
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