I studied an article about the poor labor situation of some Chinese factories in my English class.
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Actually, the labor situation of China is already well-known all over the world.
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For example, Foxcon, an electronic manufacturer which is well known with manufacturing Apple’s I-phone, is notorious for its poor labor condition.
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A lot of their workers committed suicide because of the harsh labor condition.
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China is one of the fastest developing countries (in the world).
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Their rate of economic growth for the last several 10 years was amazing.
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However, the rich-poor gap has been increasing as their high performance.
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People living in the countryside are still poor.
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China must improve these problems if they want to achieve more economic development more.
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