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   Á¦ ¸ñ   The Korean War    »ó Å  
   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-06-26
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The latest weather is very poor.
 >> CORRECT! 

It has been always hazy or crazy for the last several weeks.
 >> CORRECT! 
*always been

It’s also hardly raining.
>> It also hardly rains.

I hope see a blue and clear sky soon.
 >> CORRECT! 

By the way, today was the 63th day since the Korean War occurred.
 >> CORRECT! 

It was a very important event, but also a really a tragic war.
 >> CORRECT! 

Really a lot of soldiers and civilians were sacrificed during the war.
 >> CORRECT! 

It had been lasting for about 3 years.
 >> CORRECT! 
*lasted

All Koreans who were born at that time will not be able to forget the war.
 >> CORRECT! 

However, it is deplorable that a lot of young students can’t remember it any more.
 >> CORRECT! 

Some of them can’t know when the war occurred, who the main culprit of the war is and how the war ended.
 >> CORRECT! 
*don't know

I think this is the fault of the educational authorities.
 >> CORRECT! 

They hadn’t trained the history to the students.
 >> They didn't teach history properly to the students.

We never forget the history.
 >> We should never forget our history.

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