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Hello Jimmy!
Today I played with my friends.
> or: I played with my friends.
I rid bicycel and played in the playground.
> I rode my bicycle and played in the playground.
It was very fun.
> OK! 
I wated to play more but my mom came and went home.
> I wanted to play more but my mom came and we went home.
It was fun.
> OK!
Teacher Anne :)
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