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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-07-05
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I have a dream going on a trip to Northern Europe like Norway, Sweden, Finland and Denmark because their natural landscape, culture and society are quite different and attractive.
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*European countries

I really hope to see a glacier scene in person over there.
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Every year, a lot of Center and Southern Europeans visit there to enjoy their vacation.
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*Central

However, there is a critical problem for traveling there.
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*in

It is a terrible high prices of Northern Europe.
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*the terribly
*in

Their cities are already notorious for the high prices.
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So it is indeed an obstacle for travelers or expatriates.
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So, I can’t go on a trip there now.
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I should save a lot of money.
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And then, when I retire, I will visit the cities.
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I hope I have enough money and time when I get old.
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I’m very happy only with imagining that.
>> I'm already happy just by imagining that.

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