It was so busy Saturday for me.
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*a
First, I took my wife to Seoul because she took a test in the morning for her career.
>> CORRECT! 
*career-related test in the morning
I met my parents at their home and cut hair nearby while I had been waiting for her.
>> I met my parents at their home and then I had a hair cut nearby while waiting for her.
And then, I met one of my old friends who lives nearby and talked about our current life and work while drinking some beverage.
>> CORRECT! 
After her test, I picked her up again and we moved to Itaewon.
>> CORRECT! 
We first ate Indian cuisines like curry, Nan and Tanduri chicken.
>> CORRECT! 
Someone doesn’t like them because usually Indian foods have a strong aroma, but we enjoyed them.
>> CORRECT! 
*Some people don't
After lunch, I shopped for my summer shirts and short pants.
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OR >> After lunch, I shopped for some summer clothes. - better
My wife also looked around the stores for her bag, but she couldn’t find out a suitable one.
>> CORRECT! 
*a
Though we enjoyed our date, we were quite tired.
>> CORRECT! 
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