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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   mdj0316    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-07-10
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My dream.

I'd like to
speak about my dream. It is being an English interpreter.
Note:
    There is little difference between 'speak' and 'talk' and they are often used interchangeably.
'Speak' is often used when someone is speaking to a group of people in general. 'Speak' is also used with languages.
Peter speaks both German and Italian.
She spoke about her problems at work.
Important Note: 'Speak' tends to be used in more formal situations.
 
'Talk' is used to express informal conversation between a limited numbers of people.
My wife and I talked about our child's future.
She continued talking to Jack after I left the room.
Important Note:'Talk' is often used with the preposition 'about' when introducing the subject of conversation, and 'to' when introducing the conversational partner.
 
Use 'tell' to mean that someone has instructed or informed someone else of something. 'Tell' is often used to report what someone else has told a specific person.
Angela told them to hurry up.
Our friends told us about their experiences in Germany.
Important Note: 'Tell' is always followed by an indirect object. The infinitive form is often used following the construction to indicate instructions.

The first thing which I had to do to achieve my dream was to specialize in English in a university because I needed to spend my time useful. And fortunately, I have achieved what I wanted.
>>> The first thing which I did to achieve my dream was to specialize in English in a university because I needed to spend my time usefully. And fortunately, I have achieved what I wanted.

However, there still remain two problems.
>>> However,
there are still two problems remained.
     Or However, I still have two problems remained.
Note: Uses of “there”
        1. Use there when referring to a place, whether concrete ("over there by the building") or more abstract ("it must be difficult to live there").
       2. Also use there with the verb BE (is, am, are, was, were) to indicate the existence of something, or to mention something for the first time.
             There is an antique store on Camden Avenue.
             There are many documents that are used in investigations.
             There is a picnic area over here, and a monster and a campground across the river.
             "I see there are new flowers coming up in your garden." "Yes, they are the ones my grandmother gave me last year."
 
One is to serve in the army as an English user such as KATUSA.
>>> First is to serve in the army as an English speaker such as KATUSA.

Thus, I am trying to have the qualification to apply to the service which needs TOEIC scores.
>>> Thus, I am trying to
reach the qualifications in applying to that service which needs a certain TOEIC score.

The other is to enter the graduate school that is uniquely acknowledged
in this field.
>>> The other is to enter the graduate school that is uniquely acknowledged this field.
 
Everyone who wants to enter that school must pass its own test which is the most difficult among all of the English test in Korea.
>>> Everyone who wants to enter that school must pass
their test which is the most difficult among the entire English tests in Korea.

Though it is a tough and tiring course, I will conquer both of all.
>>> Though it is a tough and tiring course, I will conquer both of them (all of them).
 
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