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One of my hobbies is reading a book.
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However, I don’t read it at all these days.
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*anything
Instead, I play a computer game when I have a spare time.
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I’m so easy to get addicted to computer games, so once if I am addicted to games, I only play it during my spare time.
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OR >> It's so easy for me to get addicted to computer games, so one I'm addicted to it I only play it during my spare time.
Then, someday I feel it’s boring.
>> Sometimes I would feel like it's boring.
OR >> Sometimes I would get bored of it.
Afterwards, I’m able to have a time to read a book.
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The genres of the books that I like are very various like economies, business, health, natural sciences, psychology, novel and even cartoons.
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*I like books from a variety of genres
Among the novels, my favorite writer is Bernard Berber, a very famous French author.
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His works are really unique and creative.
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Sometimes, he used the same heroes and heroines to his other series.
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*on
The major subjects are super naturals like god, angel, heaven, hell, university so it’s very interesting.
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