It’s still the monsoon season.
>> CORRECT! 
This year, the aspect of the monsoon is unusual.
>> CORRECT! 
It’s very heavily raining in the Central regions of the Korean Peninsula, but it’s hot and clear in the Southern regions.
>> CORRECT! 
*raining very heavily
Especially, the weather report forecasted the downpour in the Capital areas.
>> The weather report forecasted the downpour in the capital areas.
Several small streams in those regions were already flooded.
>> CORRECT! 
Fortunately, my town is safe from flood because it’s a newly developed city and it is located near the West Sea.
>> CORRECT! 
It’s inconvenient in various ways during a monsoon season.
>> CORRECT! 
OR >> During the monsoon season, there are various inconveniences.
Firstly, it’s hot and displeased due to the high humidity.
>> CORRECT! 
*unpleasing
Secondly, it’s hard to dry the laundry.
>> CORRECT! 
Thirdly, it’s a very good environment to breed microorganisms like bacteria and fungi.
>> CORRECT! 
OR >> This environment is susceptible to the breeding of microorganisms like bacteria and fungi.
So we must be careful for foods and furniture.
>> CORRECT! 
*with our
~~~~ |