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Water.
Water is essential material for humans.
>>> Water is an essential substance for humans.
Without it, we can't live longer than just a week because our body's 70% is composed of water.
>>> Without it, we can't live longer than just a week because our body is composed /made up of 70% water.
Without it, any creatures can't live either like animals and plants because they are also composed of water as human being.
>>> Without it, any creatures can't live neither animals nor plants because they are also composed of water like humans.
In other stance, because we consist of water, we can be healthier our body by drinking enough water.
>>> In other stance, because our body consists of water, we can be healthier by drinking enough water.
If we drink water more than 2L a day, our skin will be smooth, elastic, and young.
In other words, the more water we drink the more nice skin we have.
>>> In other words, the more water we drink the nicer skin we have.
Now, I think that you know how important water is.
However, water is in big trouble by water pollution which we made from a long time ago.
>>> However, water is in big trouble because of the water pollution which we made/created a long time ago.
Or However, water is in big trouble because of the water pollution we created a long time ago.
Therefore, how about trying to relieve the pollution together?
>>> Therefore, how about trying to treat/prevent the pollution together?
If so, water will recover its original shape.
>>> If so, water will be preserved. |
