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Good morning, Brenna, I was so happy to talk to you today as well. And sorry to hang up the phone because battery was off. Please do not care of being closed our conversation^^ As I talked you a few minutes ago, I will ask one day off in a website due to company farewell tonight so let's meet next Monday.^^ Hope you can have a great weekend~~ Tks & B/rgds Jenny
Hello Jenny,
No worries about the way our conversation ended. I just presumed your son was awake and you had to rush off ^,^ Ok, I got it. I won't call you tomorrow then. Oh, and I've a few corrections on your composition, if you don't mind ^,^
Original:And sorry to hang up the phone because battery was off.
Correction: And sorry to hang up the phone but it ran out of battery.
Original: Please do not care of being closed our conversation^^
Correction: Please do not care about how our conversation ended. / Please don't take offense.
Original: As I talked you a few minutes ago, I will ask one day off in a website due to company farewell tonight so let's meet next Monday.^^
Corrections: As I told you a few minutes ago, I will ask that my class be held for a day because of my company farewell party tonight, so let's meet (talk) next (on) Monday. |
