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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   mdj0316    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-07-19
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I want to talk about soccer.

Soccer is one of the most popular sports in the world.

Especially, United Kingdom, Italy, Spain, and Germany are the biggest markets.
>>> Especially, United Kingdom, Italy, Spain, and Germany have the best clubs in the world.

Each country has a special soccer style.

UK has a dynamic style. When we watch the game, we can't take off our eyes from the match.
>>> UK has a dynamic style. When we watch their game, we can't take off our eyes from the match.

Italy has a stable style. When we loot at the game, we can feel comfortable.
>>> Italy has a stable style. When we take a look attheir game, we feel comfortable.

Spain has a speedy style. If we see the game carefully, we will notice that the players pass the ball very fast and low.
>>> Spain has a speedy/quick style. If we observe the game carefully, we will notice that the players pass the ball very fast and low.

Germany has a powerful style. If we view the game, we will think that the athletes play the game toughly and shoot the ball from
a long distance.

You can enjoy soccer much more joyfully if you know the league's property.
      ~ Hi Jun! I can’t understand why you said league’s property.. Do you mean techniques or strategies or rules?

Therefore, how about studying the properties before seeing.
>>> Therefore, how about studying the properties before watching it?
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