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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-07-22
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Finally, the sky became clear after a long time.
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I wasn’t able to see a blue sky in my town for the last 2 weeks.
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The air was also very fresh and the sunshine was also strong.
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So the weather in the afternoon was very hot.
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By the way, I’d like to talk about donation.
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Normally, people consider that donation is just material help like giving money, foods, clothes or constructing houses and infra-structure. In the past, it was true.
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However, it has been changing.
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Some people realized that only material help can’t help them anymore.
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OR >> Some people realized that material help isn't enough anymore.

In the end, they started teaching them how they can survive by themselves.
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They taught them how to earn money, like growing crops or raising animals.
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I think it’s more effective.
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