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Since it was my mother-in-law’s birthday, we visited my parents-in-law’s shop and had lunch together.
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We woke up in the morning and ate donuts and peaches for breakfast.
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And then, we went to a newly opened store near my town that sells living decorations and bought a pair of curtains for her present.
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We ate a Korean course for lunch and moved to their shop.
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*went
We talked more and I enjoyed singing songs.
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*a lot
In the evening, we left the shop and shopped for foods to prepare some dishes on the way to back home.
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After we arrived at home, we played badminton for exercise.
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*We exercised by playing badminton. - better
I think badminton is a very good exercise because it doesn’t need difficult techniques and it is easy for beginners.
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