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23rd December 2008
I planned going travel with my friends after finish my languge school.
- I planned to go on a travel/trip with my friends after finishing my language school.
- I planned to travel with my friends after finishing my language school.
The traffic of India is terrible. So usually travellers use a train. We arrived at the train station. We tried to go inside the staion. But we met a man.
He said we needed a ticket for train.
- He said, "We needed a ticket for the train."
- He said that we needed a ticket for the train.
We already had tickets but he insisted we need tickets.So we followed him.
- We already had tickets but he insisted that we need tickets so we followed him.
I felt very orkward.
- I felt very awkward.
I realised he was a deceiver. He guided us to his travel agency.
I couldn't believe nobody here.
- I couldn't believe anyone here.
- I couldn't trust anyone here.
Start travel wasn't easy at all.
- The start of my travel wasn't that easy at all.
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Hi Mey!
This is my first writing here.
Actually this diary is my life of India. I used to write diary in English but nobody check this. So I think I need checking. kk
-Actually, this diary is about my life in India.I used to write diaried in English but nobody check it.
Thank you and enjoy your day!!!
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Hi Jinwook!
Wow. I'm glad to read your first diary here in our homepage. Hehe. :)
I'd like to hear more of your traveling experiences so if you have time,
just feel free to write them here.
- Mei ^^;
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