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Hi Richard!!
I appreciate your effort wiriting. So here are your corrections:
My favorite sports is soccer.
>My favorite sport is soccer.
I'm joining in the our university soccer club.and. My club's name is Bulpae.
>I've joined our university's soccer club and it's name is Bulpae.
In korean, Bulpae means never lose.
>good
I was the captain of our team. and our team won the championship of KHU cup.
>I am the captain of our team and we won the championship in KHU cup.
the day before yesterday Park Ji-sung score a goal.
>Park Ji-sung scored a goal the day before yesterday.
>The day before yesterday, Park Ji-sung scored a goal.
I thing Mr.Park need more goal to survive their team's keen competition.
>I think Mr.Park needs more goal to survive their team's keen competition.
I stumble over the word for opposite word of 'far' and Jamie tell me the word 'near'
>I stumbled over the opposite word, "far" and Jamie told me the correct word which was "near".
-------------------------------------are this below sentenses alright?
>Are these above sentences alright?
how long have you been together?
>How long have you been together?
what is your favorite sports?
>What is your favorite sport?
what kind of sports do you like?
>What kind of sports do you like?
what is your opinion?
>What is your opinion?
The weather would little impact on playing bowling.
>The weather would only have a little impact on playing bowling.
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