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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   yoclom    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-07-31
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It is better that school childeren should wear a school uniforms.
>>> It is better for students to wear school uniforms.

First of all, if the uniform should be a fixed clothes, parents of the children should reduece a expenditure.
>>> First of all, if they have uniforms, parents of the children could lessen their expenditures.

In my case, I wore a school uniform when I was a school child, so my mother rarely bought me
a clothes so that she can save the money like those kinds of spending.
>>> In my case, I wore a school uniform when I was a school child, so my mother rarely bought me clothes so she could save the money like those kind of expenses.

Second, It represents that each students are same.
>>> Second, it represents that each students are the same.
>>>or Second, it represents their uniformity/equality.

If they are free of uniforms, It might cause some negative effect that the clothes they wear shows the level of each one.
>>> If they are free of uniforms, it might cause some negative effectsto the clothes they wear because it can show their status in life.

For example, someone who wears a luxury clothes can be compared with the other one who is wear cheap clothing.

For those reasons, I think that school uniform must be worn by students.
 
 
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