It was the first working day after our long summer vacation.
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Because we were absent for the last week, the entrances of the company building were dusty.
>> CORRECT! 
So we did a thorough cleaning of the office.
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Some of my colleagues had a lot of work to catch up on which was accumulated during the vacation.
>> CORRECT! 
Fortunately, I didn’t have work that much.
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*that much work
Nevertheless, my colleagues and I didn’t feel to work hard.
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*like working hard
It was maybe a vacation syndrome.
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*Maybe it was
Incidentally, the latest weather in Korean is terribly hot.
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I think it’s hotter than Phuket.
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The sun during day time is too hot to go out.
>> During the day time, it is too hot to go out.
The government issued heat wave warnings throughout the whole land.
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*country
I think the Korean Peninsula has becoming hotter as time goes by.
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*become
Indeed, the climate is changing.
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