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It was the 68th Gwangbokjeol, the Korean Independence Day, today.
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Also, it is a national holiday so there were a lot of kinds of festival, parade or event for celebrating the day.
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*to celebrate
By the way, we visited my parents-in-law’s house and had lunch together.
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My father-in-law got a cataract several weeks ago and he is going to a cataract surgery tomorrow.
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*have a
His doctor said it was a senile cataract.
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So we worried about him and his condition and hoped that his surgery will succeed.
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I thought that keeping fit is very important as people age while seeing him.
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OR >> As I looked at him, I thought how important it is to keep ourselves fit as we age.
Nowadays, people can live much longer than the people in the past.
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However, ‘just living’ is not good.
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Living healthily is the most important.
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OR >>> Healthy living is important.
To do it, we should keep our health in good condition since we are young.
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