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What is the competitiveness of Korea?
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The answer can be various.
>> There are various answers.
For example, K-pop, drama, movie, dance, food, traditional culture, mobile phone, home appliances, and so on.
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I think one of the major things is the diligence of Korean workers.
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Korean workers work really hard.
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OR >> Koreans work really hard.
This achieved ‘The miracle of Han River’ 30 years ago.
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*led to the achievement of
OR >> resulted to
Just after the Korean War, Korea is one of the poorest countries.
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*was
About 30 years later, Korea had developed enough to hold Asian Games and Olympic Games.
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*became well-developed enough
However, it seems that this just ‘hard working’ is not competitiveness any more.
>> However, it seems that just doing 'hard work' is not competitive anymore.
Korean workers just work for a long time.
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OR >> Koreans just work for a long time.
According to the international statics, though Korean workers spent more time to work than other countries' workers, like Germany or America, their productivity is lower.
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*working
Now, time to change it.
>>Now is the time to change it.
OR >> It's time to change it.
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