I awoke from a sleep in the midnight because of an unexpected heavy rain.
>> CORRECT! 
*at
OR >> I awoke from sleep at midnight because it suddenly rained heavily.
Though I heard from the weather forecast that it will rain in this morning, I didn’t expect that it started from the middle of the night.
>> CORRECT! 
*it to start in
So I should close all the windows at home to prevent the rain from coming into the room.
>> CORRECT! 
By the way, I talked about school lunch with my tutor in the morning.
>> CORRECT! 
I should pack my lunch box until I was the first grade of the high school.
>> I had to pack a lunch box until I was a freshman in high school.
Afterwards, my high school served a school lunch service.
>> CORRECT! 
In the past, to use a school lunch, students should pay for it.
>> CORRECT! 
*avail of the
However, now they are served it for free because of a welfare policy.
>> CORRECT! 
*the
I think it is a quite hasty policy because they didn’t secure an enough budget.
>> CORRECT! 
Now, schools can serve a free lunch but they can’t repair or build some essential facilities.
>> CORRECT! 
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