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The latest weather is very good.
>> CORRECT! 
Though it’s still hot during day time, the weather has certainly becoming cooler.
>> CORRECT!
*become
*was certainly becoming cooler
Also, the sky is very clear and blue.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, the long summer is going to end and the autumn is coming soon.
>> CORRECT!
By the way, it was a very tiring Monday for me because of heavy drinking.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It was an exhausting Monday for me because I drank heavily the night before.
One of my colleagues suggested drinking beer together near the end of our business time.
>> CORRECT!
*working hours
So we went to a pub near the office with another colleague.
>> CORRECT!
We drank several glasses of fresh beer with a delicious fried chicken and we enjoyed the time.
>> CORRECT!
So far so good, but our other colleagues and my manager joined us unexpectedly.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It was good so far, but my other colleagues and my manager suddenly joined us.
It was the beginning of the hard time.
>> That's when the hard time began/started.
He forced us to drink more and he nagged us.
>> CORRECT!
In the end, I went to back home at 1 AM.
>> CORRECT!
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