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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-09-02
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The latest weather is very clear and the sky is also deep blue.
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So we started to go on a simple picnic at a neighboring province.
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*decided

We were supposed to start to in the early morning, but we overslept so we started late.
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*early in the morning

The place we first visited was Jeongseojin, the famous view point for sunset.
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*a famous spot to see the sunset

However, it was just at noon, so we just looked around for the site.

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Secondly, we went to a valley located in a big island.
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Actually, we were somewhat disappointed with the scale of the valley.
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We looked forward to a wide and deep valley enough to swim but it was a very small.

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*wide valley deep enough to swim in

So we just immersed our feet in the valley water.

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*soaked

Lastly, we went to a sushi restaurant and ate a lot of sushi for lunch.
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In the evening, we took a rest at home.

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