It was a twisted day for me.
>> CORRECT! 
My visiting schedule was also twisted by one of my clients.
>> CORRECT! 
I made appointments with some of them.
>> CORRECT! 
However, when I arrived there and make a call to them, they said they should attend a seminar which was held unexpectedly.
>> However, when I arrived there and called them, they said they had to attend an unexpected seminar.
Finally, I was not able to have a meeting with them.
>> CORRECT! 
What a waste of time!
>> CORRECT! 
Fortunately, it was not far from our office.
>> CORRECT! 
After work, I was waiting for my wife while taking a rest at home.
>> CORRECT! 
*waited
We would just eat dinner at home.
>> We were supposed to eat dinner at home.
However, because of the rain, there was a terrible traffic jam on her way.
>> CORRECT! 
*she experienced a terrible traffic jam on her way home.
Moreover, all of the seats of the bus were occupied, so she should be standing until she arrived.
>> CORRECT! 
*in
*stood up all the way home
In the end, she got fully exhausted.
>> CORRECT! 
Better: *was totally
To recover her stamina, we dined out.
>> Ti help her regain her stamina, we dined out.
We ate a steamed pork dish.
>> CORRECT! 
Though it was delicious, it was very expensive.
>> CORRECT! 
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