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There are really a lot of kinds of races in the world.
>> CORRECT! 
OR>> There are many kinds of races in the world.
Usually, they can be roughly categorized into three, as their skin colors; white, yellow and black.
>> CORRECT!
*according to
The most serious conflict is between white and black.
>> CORRECT!
Just 50 years ago, it was a very severe social problem.
>> CORRECT!
Fortunately, the situation has been improving and it will be better in the future.
>> CORRECT!
*improved
In the case of Korea, they had a strong pride that we are a single-race nation.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> In Korea's case, we strongly believe that we are a single race nation.
Actually, it’s not true archeologically.
>> CORRECT!
Moreover, even though we are a real single-race nation, I’m not sure it’s good to be like that.
>> CORRECT!
*if we are truly a
Anyway, with this reason, Korean had tended not to be in favor of foreigners until 20 years ago.
>> Anyway, for this reason, Koreans tend not to be in favor of foreigners until 20 years ago.
Fortunately, it has been improving because it became global world.
>> CORRECT!
*of globalization
We can easily see foreigners in downtown.
>> We usually see foreigners downtown nowadays.
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