It had started raining early in the morning.
>> CORRECT! 
Since I didn’t close the windows of my home, rain drops came into the window frames and they became dusty.
>> SInce I didn't close the windows in my house, rain drops went through the window frames and they became dirty.
I hope have the windows that rain drops can’t come into the room though they are open.
>> I hope I could have windows that could not be permeated by rain.
Anyway, the long Chuseok Holiday season is coming in the next week.
>> CORRECT! 
Chuseok is one of the most important holidays, along with Seolnal, in Korea.
>> CORRECT! 
During this season, a lot of people move to visit their family and relatives.
>> CORRECT! 
*travel
Naturally, heavy traffic jams are obvious especially on the highways.
>> Naturally, there would be heavy traffic jam on the highways.
Fortunately, both my parents and my parents-in-law live in Seoul so I don’t need to drive far.
>> CORRECT! 
Nevertheless, I will be very busy on the day of Chuseok.
>> CORRECT! 
I’m looking forward to the long holidays.
>> CORRECT! 
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