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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-10-02
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I read an article about the world’s most livable city during my English class in the morning.
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Some of the top ranks are the cities in Australia, Austria, North Europe, Hawaii and so on.
>> CORRECT! 
*Some of the top cities are in

Those countries are already well known for wealthier countries.
>> CORRECT! 
*for being wealthy

The interesting thing is that most of the livable cities are mid-sized cities, not big cities.
>> CORRECT! 

It is natural when we think about it.

>> CORRECT! 

Of course, big cities are equipped with several infra structures very well.

>> CORRECT! 
*infrastructures

However, people in those cities are very busy and too tight that much.
>> CORRECT! 

Also, a lot of events and accidents occur consistently.
>> CORRECT! 

In contrast, mid-sized cities are equipped with tolerable infra structures and their atmospheres are also more peaceful and calm.
>> CORRECT! 

Sadly, no Korean cities was in the high ranks.
>> CORRECT! 
*city
OR >> Sadly, no Korean city was included in the high ranks.


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