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As autumn has been ripening, the latest weather is getting colder.
>> As autumn hits its peak, the latest weather is getting colder.
It’s colder in the morning and at night.
>> CORRECT! 
However, the sunshine during the day is still strong and hot.
>> CORRECT!
So we should protect ourselves not only from the cold but also the ultra violet rays from the sun.
>> CORRECT!
I think it’s proper that putting a light outerwear like a windbreaker in the morning and night.
>> CORRECT!
*to put on
Also, we should apply sunblock products during the day.
>> CORRECT!
Most of all, to keep in our shape to prevent not to catch a cold is important.
>> Most of all, keeping in shape to prevent ourselves from catching a cold is important.
Incidentally, it was an ordinary Tuesday for me.
>> CORRECT!
I went to work and dealt with some paper work.
>> CORRECT!
I checked the design and contents of the catalogue for our products which will be distributed in the exhibit after 2 weeks.
>> CORRECT!
Then, I went back home and took a rest for the rest of day.
>> CORRECT!
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