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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   gdragon82    µî·ÏÀÏ   2013-10-22
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I like fruits.
>> CORRECT! 

Especially, I prefer sweet fruits like banana, watermelon, mango, coconut, apple, pear, etc. than sour ones like lemon, grapefruits, etc.
>> CORRECT! 

Actually, a lot of fruits have both sweet and sour flavors except for some tropical fruits.
>> CORRECT! 

So, if I choose a wrong pineapple, I might taste a sour one.
>> CORRECT! 

Of course, I do eat sour fruits but I don’t like them that much.
>> CORRECT! 

I also like fruits juice.
>> CORRECT! 
*fruit juices

I prefer instantly grinded fruit juice than the processed one.
>> CORRECT! 
*freshly squeezed

Of course, it’s more expensive.
>> CORRECT! 

Most of fruits are good for our health.
>> CORRECT! 

They have a lot of kinds of vitamins and essential inorganic traces.
>> CORRECT! 

They don’t have many calories except some of them.
>> With the exception of some, most of them don't have many calories.

However, eating too much is also not good.
>> CORRECT! 
OR >> However, eating too much fruits is also not good.

Due to the fruits, our tables are able to be abundant.

>> CORRECT! 
*become

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