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I had a calm and peaceful weekend.
> OK
On Saturday, my wife had to go to her company to attend a seminar.
> OK
So, I also woke up early to take her by driving.
> or... So, I also had to wake up early to drive her there.
After I went back home,
> OK
I ate breakfast and started taking a rest while playing a computer game.
> OK
Then, I ate ramen for lunch and took a nap.
> OK
Around the late afternoon, I went to her company again to pick her up.
> Around late afternoon, I went to her company again to pick her up.
> I drove back to her office to pick her up late in the afternoon.
However, it took more time because of the heavy traffic jam on the way.
> OK
We went to a buffet restaurant in my town and we enjoyed several kinds of dishes like salad, pizza, chicken, noodle, etc as much as we wanted.
> OK
On Sunday, we stayed at home the entire day while cleaning the house, doing laundry and preparing meals.
> or... On Sunday, we stayed home the entire time while cleaning the house, doing the laundry and preparing meals.
I think a weekend always passes fast.
> or... I think a weekend always passes quickly
> or... I think, a weekend always passes swiftly.
> or... I think weekends always pass by fast/quickly/swiftly.
GOOD JOB, GD!
All of your sentences are grammatically acceptable. I just gave you other options to probably say them better. :-)
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