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Indeed, I was able to ( see ) a blue and clear sky.
> GOOD
It had been a really long time since I last saw the blue sky several weeks ago.
> VERY GOOD
I also saw the bright sun and the view was also clear.
> VERY GOOD
This clear weather after a long time elevated my wife and I.
> Seeing this clear weather after a long time cheered (us) my wife and I up.
The blue sky also made us feel good and become more active.
> VERY GOOD
So, we started cleaning our house up fast.
> VERY GOOD
We spent less time than usual.
> VERY GOOD
After cleaning, we went to a big park which has a small lake in the center near my town.
> VERY GOOD
There are a lot of people who were enjoying the good weather.
> VERY GOOD
Though the wind blew, we took a walk in the park.
> Though it was quite windy, we took a walk in the park.
And then, we went to a big mart and shopped for some food ingredients, fruits and so on.
> VERY GOOD
We really enjoyed our Sunday.
> VERY GOOD!
GOOD JOB, Sir!! You almost got the entire thing perfectly composed. There are just VERY minor corrections and it is highly possible that you have just forgotten to include the words or that you might have just mistyped some others. Anyway, keep up the excellent work! It's very impressive!
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