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Hello Crystal,
Thank you for your eforts in writing, do keep this up please.
Here are some corrections:
>>> The definition of sloppy is disorganized, dirty and unclean, while neat people are those who are organized and systematic. please check your source.
In fact, sloppy people are virtually diligent, whereas neat people are lazy and mean.
> It is a fact that sloppy people are virtually diligent, whereas neat people are lazy and mean.
> I don't actually agree with this:)
Sloppy people have a tendency of a perfectionist and they are considerably organized people who like to arrange their materials very neatly and systematically.
> Neat people have the tendency to be perfectionists and they are considerably organized people, who like to arrange their materials very neatly and systematically.
Also, they are inclined to accumulate something until they scrutinize and deliberate it fully, so they may seemingly look nasty due to a number of stuff around them.
> Great sentence.
In contrast, neat people are apt to conduct something simple and convenient way.
> In contrast, sloppy people are apt to conduct something simple and in a convenient way.
They also focus on only results not process, that is, they just like the simple existing situation without anything irritating.
>:)
Further, they are careless and do not like to figure out something prudently so they just look items over and throw them away.
> :)
Great piece. Please check your terms though NEAT versus SLOPPY.
Teacher NEa:) |
