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Hello Crystal,
Sorry for the delay in correction, I hope you enjoyed New Year's Day:)
The previous writing was a summary of a text, which is against the sterotype that poeple normally think about sloppy poeple and neat people. ^^;
> The previous essay, was a summary of a textm whih talked about the stereotype that people normally have when it comes to sloppy people versus neat people.
First of all, with regard to the content of the given writing, the strong point of it is that the main idea is fairly clear.
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The student writes the main idea with the first sentence, ‘Summer is my favorite season’, at the beginning of the paragraph.
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Therefore, it is easy to notice what the writer wants to say. Another strong point involved in its organization is that the writer provides two main reasons supporting the main idea, ‘I like the summer clothing and the outdoor activities’. Further, they are described more specifically in the following paragraph, and that fulfills coherence.
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See you tomorrow.
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