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Hello Mr. Joey
I'm pleased to know that I heard you right
>>>Here are some grammar corrections. Kindly check on them^-^
Thursday, February 18, 2010
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You're right in saying that.
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I used was the word that was "feature".
=The word I used was "feature".
I can't many things because duty due to of my job.
=I can't do many things because of my job.
I can't take a trip far away, and I can't enjoy a vacation for a long time.
=I can't take a trip that is so far and I can't enjoy a vacation for a long time. 
I'm a lot of restricted travel abroad because of my job.
=My job restricts me from traveling abroad.
My voice is strong and high-pitched tone, so I had bad pronunciation. (T-T..
=My voice is strong and has a high-pitched tone, so I had a bad pronunciation.
I hope you understand.
= (Yes, I do understand )
Thank you very much. Have a lovely sleep tonight~
=(Thank you very much too and I had a lovely sleep last night )
Teacher Khristine
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