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Hello Sung Jin,
Wonderful piece of writing this was, do continue writing... as for the limit in characters you can post as many diaries as you can in one day. So continue writing.
Here are the corrections.
Oh, drums~.
>)
Whenever I play drums, I often have an illusion as if I am playing an instrument God awarded to me.
>:)
Like this I sad, drums are my life's energy which can encourage my tired spirit, because of my ordinary, normal and no changing routine. kk, I think I did over;;
> Like I said, drums are my life's energy, which can encourage my tired spirit, due to my ordinary, normal and unchanging routine. Okay. I tjink I should do it over.
But till now, the old saying ' practice makes perfect' didn't fit with me rather.
> sentence is fragmented... rather... what? You need to continue with something, a comparison perhaps.
And I didn't have any teachers.
>:)
So, getting more progressed skills quickly was so difficult.
> So progressing quickly with my skills was quite difficult.
But, now!! I got a teacher who are professional at all the instruments and musical devices!!
> But now, I got a teacher who is quite professional with all the instruments and musical devices.
Actually, my little dream was to be an entertainer.
> Actually my small dream, was to be an entertainer.
> Actually my dream when I was little was to be an entertainer.
(But frankly saying I'm an entertainer to my friend's eyes already, haha.)
> :)
So I'm more happy to meet this teacher like him.
>:)
You do know that you are a natural born writer. You're writing flows and is very passionate. Keep on writing.
See you tomorrow.
Teacher NEa:)
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