>>>Today is Saturday and I slept late last night.
I watched tv show (drama), "chasing slave" with my wife.
>>>I watched a TV drama which is entitled " Chasing Slave" with my wife.
>>>I watched a TV drama, Chasing Slave, with my wife. ( Proper nouns must be capitalized.)
The drama is very interesting and energetic.
>>>Nice job!
Two men who are leading actors played a good role, and there are capable supporting actors and actress.
>>>Two men who are the leading actors played good roles and there are also capable supporting actors and actressess.
I also like listening to theme song.
>>> I also like listening to the theme song.(Use article "the" when you are talking of something specific.)
>>>I also like the theme song.
>>>I like the theme song too.
Many spectators and internet users criticized(blamed) the leading actress's bad performance.
>>>great!
I agree to their critics.
>>>I agree with their critics.
In spite she is a slave, she is showing too beautiful and brilliant on screen.
>>>In spite of being a slave. she looked too beautiful and brilliant on the screen.
>>>She was too beautiful and brilliant to play depict the role of a slave.
It's the only fault(demerit).
>>>It's the only weaksness.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday night with a glad heart.
( Thanks! You too! )
