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Hi Ari!
Nice to read something from you again!
Enjoy your new computer!
I'm so happy to read something about your husband, too!
I think you are a proud wife!=)
Enjoy the week!
Take care always!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Today I bought a new notebook.
>>>Today, I bought a new notebook.
This one is my first notebook.
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It has good functions.
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I'm really happy.
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Everythings very fantastic.hohoho.
>>>Everything's very fantastic!
My husband was given for award from his company.
>>>My husband was given an award by his company.
He works as a civil enginer.
>>>He works as a civil engineer.
Theseday he made a underground-turnel.
>>>These days he made an underground tunnel.
He is in chage of it.
>>>He is in-charge of it.
at the evening, I ate some pizza with my familly for celebrate a new
computer.
>>>In the evening, I ate some pizza with my family to celebrate our new
computer.
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