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Hello Ari!
I think you are a thoughtful sister.
I'm sure your brother will be happy whatever present you will give him!
Send my greetings to him. Congratulations!
Enjoy!
TAke care!
-teacher jha
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I have to prepare for my brother's graduation present.
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I hegitated what is good one?
>>>I am thinking which one is good.
He wants to buy a new electronic dictionary.
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Gone are the days of thick, cumbersome paper dictoinary.
>>>Gone are the days of thick, cumbersome paper dictionaries.
students use sleek,pochet -sized ecltronic dictoinary.
>>>Students use sleek, pocket -sized, electronic dictionary.
It can listen to music or download study material.
>>>One can listen to music or download study materials.
also, some of them are possible watching TV.
>>>Also, it is possible to watch TV in some.
Thesesday I don't have enough money.I'm sobbing
>>>These days, I don't have enough money. I'm sobbing.
anyway I have to find the cheapest elctronic dictoinary.^^
>>>Anyway, I have to find the cheapest electronic dictionary.^^
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