Hello Sungjin,
I really do enjoy your writing. It seems so natural for you to express yourself through your written work. I do hope you can apply this manner when you are talking.
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Anyway, I'm so glad to have such a good man as my music teacher!!
>:)
I'm really happy whenever I think about my future's more developed skills which would be taught by him as his best pupil, hehe.
>:)
Thanks nea for reading this long and non arranged writing~^^
> Thanks Nea, for reading this long and non-arranged writing.
> :)
Have a nice day~
(I can't assure you can understand my all sentences)
> I actually do. I told you before you are a natural at writing. You have the potential to be a creative writer.
£ªI'm wondering about american chatting words in computers.
> I'm wondering about American chat expressions on the computer.
Please, tell me some basic things about expressing your emotions. >:) I will try during our conversation.
//But till now, the old saying ' practice makes perfect' didn't fit with me rather.
Maybe, It can be changed to this sentence, But till now, the old saying ' practice makes perfect' somewhat didn't apply to me.// < Would it be fine?
> Better :)
See you later.
Teacher NEa:) |