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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   tjdwls334    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-02-22
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Hello Sungjin,

 

I really do enjoy your writing. It seems so natural for you to express yourself through your written work. I do hope you can apply this manner when you are talking.

 

Here are some corrections:

 

Anyway, I'm so glad to have such a good man as my music teacher!!

>:)


I'm really happy whenever I think about my future's more developed skills which would be taught by him as his best pupil, hehe.

>:)


Thanks nea for reading this long and non arranged writing~^^

> Thanks Nea, for reading this long and non-arranged writing.

> :)


Have a nice day~


(I can't assure you can understand my all sentences)

> I actually do. I told you before you are a natural at writing. You have the potential to be a creative writer.

£ªI'm wondering about american chatting words in computers.

> I'm wondering about American chat expressions on the computer.


Please, tell me some basic things about expressing your emotions.
>:) I will try during our conversation.



//But till now, the old saying ' practice makes perfect' didn't fit with me rather.

Maybe, It can be changed to this sentence,
But till now, the old saying ' practice makes perfect' somewhat didn't apply to me.// < Would it be fine?

> Better :)

 

See you later.

 

Teacher NEa:)

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