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Hello Sung Jin,
I hope the dentist trip went okay :) Here are your corrections for this piece:
It was so fortunate that I knew him.>:)
I knew him since I was 14 when I was so tired of changed life as I entered the school. > I knew him since I was 14, when I was so tired of my changing life as I entered school.
Because of him, I could overcome my hard life. > :)
Because there was him, I could stand here now. > poetic license; grammar wise though it would be better to state it this way : Because he was there, I could stand here now.
You know what? He is a world famous and very competent singer-songwriter. >:)
His guitar ability as well as singing is so excellent. > His guitar abilities as well as his singing are excellent.
And he knows what a feeling is. > And he knows how to express his feeling. > And he knows how to feel.
His song has his only feeling, and the songs are so pure. > His songs show how he is feeling, and the songs are so pure.
And he seems to really love his music. > :)
When I see his playing movies, I can feel it. > When I her his songs in movies, I can feel it.
Maybe it is the biggist reason why he is loved by such many masses. > Maybe it's the biggest reason why he is loved by the masses.
And he gave me a dream. I want to be an singer-songwriter like him.It's my real desire. >:)
I want to say 'thank you, my lover' to him directly who made my life so interesting. >:)
The very name is Jason mraz.
> His very name is Jason Mraz.
>>> Interesting piece you have here. I am curious about the last two lines though. I'm not sure if you meant to say it that way. >> Do review on the meanings linked to the word "lover."
See you tomorrow.
TEacher nEa :) |
