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Daily work
i woke up at 9:00 ,as soon as i wake up
i was tired but i clean up my room after i had water
>I woke up at 9:00, as soon as I woke up I cleaned my room.
I was tired and I drank a glass of water.
and then i prepared my class, turn on my computer and skype
after i finished my class i had lunch with music
and then i took a shower
>and then, I prepared for my class,I turned on my computer and skype.
after I finished my class, I had my lunch while I was listening to music and then I took a shower.
after a little i went to work in Buam-dong, Busan , Korea south :)
as soon as i arrive i feeled warm , weather was getting hotter
>After awhile, I went to work in Buam- dong Busan in south korea.
as soon as I arrived,I felt warm.The weather was getting hotter.
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Hello Philip,
your getting better compared to your other diaries. Please don't forget to capitalize I, when you are refering to yourself.
try to review your vocabulary words in it's past form like feeled- felt. |
