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Hi Elin!
Keep on being challenged and aim high always!
Good luck to you!
Take care!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Title: Is there anything that concerns you about going to this school?
Frankly,I was very concerned to apply this school.
>>>Frankly,I was very concerned to apply in this school.
I thought 'what can I do if I disqualified this exam?','Can I do well with more good students?'.
>>>I thought "What will I do if I get disqualified in this exam?'', "Can I do well even there are better students than me?".
I wanted to meet more smart students and to be a global student.
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I concernded it that can I do well with more smart student.
>>>I was concerned about doing well than smarter students.
But it is what I wanted.
>>>
I couldn't meet many good students.
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'can meet good students' is on of my reason that I applied this school.
>>>Meeting good students is one of my reasons why I applied in this school.
I concerned it that I can disqualified this exam.
>>>I was concerned about disqualifying from the exam.
I considered that apply the other high school which can success in an exam more easily.
>>>I considered applying in other high schools where exams are easier.
But I couldn't give up this school.
>>>
I have a big dream well matched with this school.
>>>I have a big dream that is well- matched with this school.
My motto is 'challenging people is beautiful'.
>>>My motto is "Challenging people is beautiful".
So I challenged this school an I don't have any regret.
>>> So I feel challenged in this school and I don't have any regret. |
