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Hello Hee Jin,
Thank you for being so conversant too :) I had fun.
Here are some corrections:
thanks for this english class, I can start of today very powerfully.
> Thanks for this English class, I can start today powerfully.
Today I have a chance to go to the broadcasting center because I won tickets to see one of the most famous music stations in Korea.
>:)
I can see many Korean pop stars.
> Weee.... get me a picture of Bi :)
Luckily, today is that music station's 2th anniversary !
> 2nd (second)
So, stage will be packed with many famous stars.
> So the stage would be packed with many famous stars.
> :))
I expect today's planning to go the music show.
> I expect that today all my plans would be towards that music show.
I hope that I enjoy today's broadcasting show. I hope release my stress and forget all bad things.
Wish me good luck ! bye bye!
> Good luck dear. PLease... pcture... pictures... send me pictures.
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