Hello Sung Jin,
Let's begin by tweaking the title a little : "My Second Family, My friends"
I can't think about a life without them. When I am down, they can console me. And when I do something good, they can compliment me.
> Beautiful sentences, good start.
But when I go wrongs, they can advice me for myself.
> But when things go wrong, they give me advice.
We always can think each other considerately.
> We always take each others thoughts in consideration.
> We are always considerate of each other.
But now I should leave them and I should go to another place, due to my high school.
>:(
As I mentioned, I hate even to imagine the life without them.
>:)
It's so sad, but we can overcome.
> It's so sad, but I know that we can overcome this.
Because I know that we will never forget each other and we will meet one day.
>:)
So, in future, to meet them in a better figure, I should do better for my life and should study more hard.
> So in the future we would meet them as better figures, I should do better for my life and ahould study harder.
See you in a bit.
Teacher NEa:) |