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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   tjdwls334    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-02-24
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Hello Sung Jin,

 

Let's begin by tweaking the title a little : "My Second Family, My friends"

 

I can't think about a life without them.
When I am down, they can console me.
And when I do something good, they can compliment me.

> Beautiful sentences, good start.


But when I go wrongs, they can advice me for myself.

> But when things go wrong, they give me advice.


We always can think each other considerately.

> We always take each others thoughts in consideration.

> We are always considerate of each other.


But now I should leave them and I should go to another place, due to my high school.

>:(


As I mentioned, I hate even to imagine the life without them.

>:)


It's so sad, but we can overcome.

> It's so sad, but I know that we can overcome this.


Because I know that we will never forget each other and we will meet one day.

>:)


So, in future, to meet them in a better figure, I should do better for my life and should study more hard.

> So in the future we would meet them as better figures, I should do better for my life and ahould study harder.

 

See you in a bit.

 

Teacher NEa:)

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