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Hello Elin!
I definitely agree with you!
Music is really powerful and I can't live without!
Music sets people free and makes people live!
Take care always!
-teacher jha
CORRECTION:
Title: What is your favorite class and why?
My favorite class is music.
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I love music.
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I think music has special ability to make people happy.
>>>I think music has a special ability to make people happy.
I have a lot of good abilities of music.
>>>I have a lot of good musical abilities.
I hoped to be a pianist when I was young,and I recieved many prices of composition and piano.
>>>I hoped to be a pianist when I was young and I have received many prices from composition and piano.
I enjoyed shcool orchestra,too.
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I believe music is one of virtue that people have to complete.
>>>I believe that music is one of the virtues that people has to complete.
We can communicate by music.Music is the other language.
>>>We can communicate through music. Music is a language.
I love to share my feelings by music.
>>>I love to share my feelings through music.
That is my reason I enjoy the music class.
>>>That is my reason why I enjoy music classes.
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