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   ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ   arida0613    µî·ÏÀÏ   2010-02-26
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Hello Ari!
It's ok. I understand you.

I hope you will just keep on trying for you to practice well!

Don't be afraid to commit mistakes. Relax. I will be here to guide you!

HAve a great weekend!
TAke care!

-jha

 

CORRECTION:

 

teacher,I'm really sorry about my stammerring due to my poor vocabulary.

>>>, it's ok.


I don't know why.

>>>

 

I think my brain is out of order.^^
>>>

 

I'll try harder .Have a great weekend.
>>>

2PM is the most famous boy band group.
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They are consist of seven but now they're just six due to sudden withdrawal of leader Jaebeom following an Internet controversy in September 2009.

>>>It is consisted of seven members but now they're just six due to the sudden withdrawal of their  leader Jaebeom following an Internet controversy in September 2009.


That was very big social issue in korea.

>>>That was a big social issue in Korea.


And today, the leader jaebeom is determined to break away form his group forever.I feel so embarrased and sad.
>>>And today, the leader, Jaebeom, is determined to break away form his group forever.

 

I feel so embarrased and sad.
>>>I feel so embarrased and sad. (What do you mean embarrassed? Why do you feel that?)

 

I'm big fan the 2pm.My son likes them,too.
>>>I'm a big fan of 2pm. My son likes them,too.

 

I'd like to comfort them.

>>>

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