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Hello Miri,
Thanks for completing your homework.
Here are some corrections:
1. China job is very shortage. so many people move to downtown.
> In China there is a shortage of jobs, so many people move to the downtown area.
but, Korea people think very important of education .
> But in Korea people think that education is very important.
rural and downtown of education quality is very different .
> The quality of education between the rural and the downtown areas are different.
so many people move to downtown . In order to enter better university school.
> So many people move to the downtown area, in order to enter a better university.
2. Many company`s duty . Big company raise in a money from citizen. so a little of back citizen . for example , schorship, donation.
> It is the duty of masny companies to raise money for the citiizens, so a little of the money goes back through scholarships and donations.
3. I think male is felt science and math but, female is felt language and social science . so am l felt too.
> I think that most males like Science and Math, and that females like laguage and social science, so I fell that way too.
TEacher NEa:)
4. other peole work for aptitude. just myself work for that.
for example , just like social worker. |
